I would like to know your opinions on the ellipsis in dialogue.
Would you use:
“Well, gee…I don’t know?”
“Well, gee… I don’t know?”
“Well, gee … I don’t know?”
“Well, gee . . . I don’t know?”
Or some other variation?
I tried to find what CMS had to say about it and didn’t find anything authoritative.
Thanks for your question about the proper spacing of ellipses. In my view, only the second example (“gee… I don’t know”) would likely be seen as incorrect, because there should be the same amount of space on both sides. Otherwise it’s arguably only a matter of preference. The fourth example is my favorite and probably the one I’d advise. It’s the one that seems to appear in print most often.
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OK, so a mistake here isn’t going to make or break you, but there is a difference between “between” and “among,” so why not learn it? If all of the following sentences sound right to your ears, read on.
|A.||It came down to a contest between Sally, Greg, and Consuelo for class president.|
|B.||I couldn’t decide between lavender and strawberry scented air freshener.|
|C.||Neil Armstrong truly was a giant among men.|
|D.||Katniss decided that the forest was the safest place; she could easily hide among the trees.|
I’m not one of those grammar fascists who corrects other people’s speech. I don’t point out when a speaker should use “whom” instead of “who.”
Or at least, I don’t do it that often, and not to people’s faces. That would just be obnoxious. (I’m not saying I haven’t done it in the past.) I feel that people coming up with language on the fly should be given more latitude than if they were writing it down, where it had a chance to be analyzed. Colloquialisms are okay when they are uttered and forgotten, when they don’t exist for longer than the seven seconds of a listener’s short-term aural memory. If you use “me” instead of “I” in conversation, I probably won’t chastise you—although, for my amusement, I can and will imagine you talking with a Jamaican accent. If you say, “Me and John are going to get a beer,” my mind will superimpose dredlocks on you and play, “Me gwan to get a Red Stripe, mon.”
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